Wednesday, May 11, 2005

Third person

I really enjoy blogging and have found such pleasure in my words. I try to write from my heart with real live stuff. My husband is the one who inspired me to do this because he is an internet buzzlight. I always call him to hear his opinion about what I have written. Today, I wanted to hear his thoughts and he started with how poor I do with sentence structure and grammer. I have written incorrectly in the third person stuff, my commas are too close, I don't proof read correctly, etc. He informs me that he is a grammer king! His grandmother grilled this English stuff into him for the duration of his young years and thereafter. How nice, I think. I do not want to seem dumb, poorly educated because I don't know the correct grammer. I am a surgical nurse and I know my job; however, I realize I am not as familiar with writing. If anyone does read these blogs, I will try to improve on my mistakes and relearn what I seem to have forgotten. As to my mistakes, see the content and intent of my words. I am writing what I feel from deep within. I become excited as the keys fly and my story evolves. I touch each word because they come from me and no one else. This stories are mine and help me claim my uniqueness. Yes I do feel alittle embarrassed that I am an educated woman that cannot diagram a sentence, but I can move fast in a life or death situation at work and I know what to do. I have confidence, passion in my work. I will conquer this. Bear with me and listen with your heart as you read don't see my words through letters and commas.

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